My Crude Attempt To Assess Her Happiness Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

My Crude Attempt To Assess Her Happiness

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Today I looked at her face
Her way of looking at me
My attempt to crudely assess
If she only fakes to be happy!

I noticed how parted her lip
When she spoke if twinkled her eyes
If her words fell gently or steep
Is she happy or hiding her cries!

I tried to read her face's lines
Looked to find on it a trace
If were laid there some signs
Crying loudly of hidden distress!

Can't say it was much of a success
For my eyes were biased lovingly
To read only one thing from her face
That she is quite happy with me!

Saturday, August 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 31 August 2014

Your crude attempts on the periphery on her was interesting. But my dear - to read and know a lady's mind! ! Is it so easy? ? I bear some doubts still. Only thing what I understand is that you are to love and support her unconditionally to be nearer to her.

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Lorraine Colon 30 August 2014

Of course she's happy with you. You give her the care and attention she needs - that's all a woman asks for. Very nice poem.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 30 August 2014

So lovingly scripted this piece.......Pradipji......I loved it

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