Today I looked at her face
Her way of looking at me
My attempt to crudely assess
If she only fakes to be happy!
I noticed how parted her lip
When she spoke if twinkled her eyes
If her words fell gently or steep
Is she happy or hiding her cries!
I tried to read her face's lines
Looked to find on it a trace
If were laid there some signs
Crying loudly of hidden distress!
Can't say it was much of a success
For my eyes were biased lovingly
To read only one thing from her face
That she is quite happy with me!
Of course she's happy with you. You give her the care and attention she needs - that's all a woman asks for. Very nice poem.
So lovingly scripted this piece.......Pradipji......I loved it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your crude attempts on the periphery on her was interesting. But my dear - to read and know a lady's mind! ! Is it so easy? ? I bear some doubts still. Only thing what I understand is that you are to love and support her unconditionally to be nearer to her.