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My Darling Wife

Rating: 5.0
'Goodnight' my darling he whispered, as he perched himself on the bed,
'I was thinking of you today, you know, about the day we wed.
You looked so pure and perfect, like a cherub upon a cloud,
Approaching me from down the isle. you made me feel so proud.
It's been forty years since that day, everyday spent with you,
And now I sit here alone, i dont know what to do.
I played your favourite song today and sat there on your chair,
I closed my eyes and for a while I saw you standing there.
But you wasn't weak and tired, nor sick or in pain,
No, you were standing in your wedding dress fit and healthy again.
You tried to tell me something, but I could only hear the song,
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Marilyn Lott 25 November 2008
Absolutely beautiful, Lindsey. You are a great story teller with so much emotion and compassion. Keep writing! Another '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn
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Fiona Davidson 24 November 2008
Beautifully written tale of devotion...loved it...thank you...Fi
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Patricia Gale 22 November 2008
Such love and devotion, a heart touching piece.
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May Namoc 24 October 2008
aaawwww, so sad yet soo beautiful! Well done lindsey! i love the rhyming and the story was mezmerizing. you've got a knack for poems with story and its amazing/ what a wonderful piece you've bestowed upon us all. keep writing lindsey! ! love your work! May
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Alan Duffield-lock 22 October 2008
WOW this is a lovely beautifully rhyming and sentimental poem well done alan x
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Billy Joe Collins 22 October 2008
i can see the feelings come deep from youe heart very nice poem
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Aden orie 12 October 2008
awesome ryming, and also alot of feeling! i like how it changes your thaughts, because its really deep! good write
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