My Docent... Poem by Neha Aradhye

My Docent...



Sitting on the bed,
studying at night or day,
I wish there was someone beside me,
doing the same thing & clearing my doubts away...

If mom or dad or both jump on me,
wish that someone takes my side & favours me...


If i am stucked somewhere,
or lost in the world o nowhere,
or following some wrong path,
wish that big someone lights on to guide me
& leads me to the right point of compass by making me understand with an ease & beauty........


Wish that elder someone was there, appreciating me for what i am, for what i have, feeling glad that i am his/her sister.....

:)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 25 March 2009

I agree with Amit hundred percent....even this poem if any known person happens to read....be careful....but to say the truth this poem has an outpour of emotion..nice10

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Amit Gokhale 21 October 2008

Its true that poem is a sponteneous overflow of powerfull feelings. But you should remember and think twice before writting such things, may be you don't know some elderly person near to you, always cares for you, when you are in trouble. Always takes your side, when the world is against you. Always try to guide you, if he/she thinks that you are following a wrong path. He/she crys when you cry, and becomes the happiest person when you are happy. So if you write such a thing unknowingly, you are actually insulting that some one.

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Gargi Saha 18 October 2008

A nice poem expressing the need to be out of the clutches of the parents who r sometimes a bit over protective.

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