My Dream Poem by AYESHA NIKHATH

My Dream

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once i had a dream
that i had been to the land of ice cream
chocolates hanging on the trees
biscuits lying on the streets
five stars and eclairs were in a row
rivers of limca and thumps up flowed
wafers and chips filled the air
birds carrying popcorn flew everywhere
i was thrilled and ran to have it all
but alas! from my bed what a fall!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zen Bojczuk 14 January 2007

Here I am trying to lose weight... and you are making me so hungry. :) Nice poem.

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Ashish R 14 January 2007

lol...nice n cute poem. Ashish.

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Mahfooz Ali 16 March 2007

Ha hah ah aha ha..........VERY (100000000000000000000000000000000000000) NICE poem, Ayesha. Mazaa aa gaya padh kar.

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Catastrophe King 20 February 2007

WOW! ! What a fantabulous dream, but....? ! ? ! ? ! I am scared of the weight that one may gain in such surroundings....

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 18 February 2007

Good poem Ayesha... i wish the world was chocolate nice...

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Kee Thampi 16 February 2007

writes freely with open wonder World of poems

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Poornima Kanasen 12 February 2007

Hey Ayesha, Nice one, indeed..When I was much younger, I thought cartoons were alive as in human beings..And you can actually see cartoons in action in Disneyland..Too bad..I used to think that there was a land coated with chocolate and only chocolate..Anyway, good luck and best wishes to you.. K.Poornima

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