I don't trust you now.
I have to talk about it.
But I don't know how
Because I am still so weak.
I must forget your eyes
And I must shut the door.
I'm ready to pay this price
Doesn't scare me any more.
Don't you hear my soul screams
Every night and every day?
How coud you break all my dreams?
You gave no chance to stay.
Now you have much time
To think about my life.
But you don't want to try
And it makes me cry.
My angel couldn't save my soul
And I lost myself.
I know it's my own fault
That my fate is hell.
You even can't suspect
How I'm tired of my life.
I have no hope in fact.
Now I am a suicide.
It sounds as if the subject of the poem commits suicide, and he blame his Angel for not saving his soul, and also admit that it was his fault, this is a good poem, depicting hopelessness, you r good.
very sad poem... but wonderful writing. you`re true talent)
Pessimistic. Try reading my love poems and enjoy and comment as well. Thank u
Ah, before you take such a terrible step, consider your brave country's poet Anna Akhmatova. There is always a higher purpose to the disappointments of life. I give you her example of true courage. poem translated into English: When you're drunk it's so much fun - Your stories don't make sense. An early fall has strung The elms with yellow flags. We've strayed into the land of deceit And we're repenting bitterly, Why then are we smiling these Strange and frozen smiles? We wanted piercing anguish Instead of placid happiness... I won't abandon my comrade, So dissolute and mild. 1911 (Paris
YOUR POEM IS FULL OF EMOTIONS AND THEY ARE FELT YOU HAVE A VERY NICE SET OF WORDS THEY CREATE THE SCENE SO WELL AND I IMAGINED THE PAIN YOU FEEL. very nice, ten votes for this
Don't be tired of the life. The are more to feel in this world's another side. If you feel to like suicide, Just try a poem to write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Waoh! Lovely poem though the mood is sad.