Jane Trott

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My Fate Is Hell - Poem by Jane Trott

I don't trust you now.
I have to talk about it.
But I don't know how
Because I am still so weak.

I must forget your eyes
And I must shut the door.
I'm ready to pay this price
Doesn't scare me any more.

Don't you hear my soul screams
Every night and every day?
How coud you break all my dreams?
You gave no chance to stay.

Now you have much time
To think about my life.
But you don't want to try
And it makes me cry.

My angel couldn't save my soul
And I lost myself.
I know it's my own fault
That my fate is hell.

You even can't suspect
How I'm tired of my life.
I have no hope in fact.
Now I am a suicide.


Comments about My Fate Is Hell by Jane Trott

  • Subrat Pradhan Love-immortal (8/2/2012 10:09:00 AM)


    Pessimistic. Try reading my love poems and enjoy and comment as well. Thank u (Report) Reply

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  • Ralph The Elf (7/4/2012 1:59:00 PM)


    beautiful...very poignant write.
    i love this
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  • Adeline Foster (4/16/2012 2:27:00 PM)


    Ah, before you take such a terrible step, consider your brave country's poet Anna
    Akhmatova. There is always a higher purpose to the disappointments of life. I give you her example of true courage.

    poem translated into English:
    When you're drunk it's so much fun -
    Your stories don't make sense.
    An early fall has strung
    The elms with yellow flags.

    We've strayed into the land of deceit
    And we're repenting bitterly,
    Why then are we smiling these
    Strange and frozen smiles?

    We wanted piercing anguish
    Instead of placid happiness...
    I won't abandon my comrade,
    So dissolute and mild.
    1911 (Paris
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  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (2/23/2012 3:17:00 AM)


    YOUR POEM IS FULL OF EMOTIONS
    AND THEY ARE FELT
    YOU HAVE A VERY NICE SET OF WORDS
    THEY CREATE THE SCENE SO WELL
    AND I IMAGINED THE PAIN YOU FEEL.

    very nice, ten votes for this
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  • Gordon Tseng (2/21/2012 10:33:00 PM)


    Don't be tired of the life.
    The are more to feel in this world's another side.
    If you feel to like suicide,
    Just try a poem to write.
    (Report) Reply

  • Ekaterina M. Polischuk (2/21/2012 1:33:00 PM)


    very sad poem... but wonderful writing. you`re true talent) (Report) Reply

  • (10/30/2011 5:59:00 AM)


    Sad indeed. Beautifuly written, though. (Report) Reply

  • (9/25/2011 12:21:00 AM)


    It sounds as if the subject of the poem commits suicide, and he blame his Angel for not saving his soul, and also admit that it was his fault, this is a good poem, depicting hopelessness, you r good. (Report) Reply

  • (5/13/2011 10:11:00 AM)


    Waoh! Lovely poem though the mood is sad. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 22, 2012


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