My Fella Poem by Scarborough Gypsy

My Fella

Rating: 5.0


My sleep is abruptly interrupted
Morning mechanics kick into gear
Affection first on his agenda
Arms outstretched he pulls me near

Can’t start the day on an empty stomach
Serve up a breakfast that makes him drool
Next take a playful shower together
Then romp naked down the hall

Mood turns next to serious matters
Why can’t we ever find the comb?
Button his shirt and brush his trousers
Hair smoothed down he leaves the home

Quick safety check of wheels and tyres
Trailer loaded and ready to roll
About to leave when he remembers
Forgotten his phone and change for toll

Runs inside and retrieves these items
Peck on the cheek and an “I love you”
Watch him scoot off up the garden
This cute little fellow is only two.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 04 April 2005

simple and lovely gypsy

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Lenchen Elf 04 April 2005

Really enjoyed this one, thanks: -)

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Drew Chadwick 04 April 2005

I loved this poem. The ending is excellent! ! Well done!

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Michael Gale 17 February 2006

A very good poem, once again. Enjoyed the surprised ending. Regards!

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Elizabeth Russell 24 April 2005

I love this one Gypsy, there was a nice twist and on both levels it is wonderful

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Winter Lees 16 April 2005

I LOVE YOUR POEM IT IS VERY UNIQUE AND THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENTS AND I AM ONLY 12 YEARS OF AGE AND AFTER MY MOTHER DIED LAST YEAR I AM INTO POEMS BECAUSE WHEN ME AND MY FAMILY WENT TO HER HOUSE I FOUND ALOT OF HER WORK BUT ANY WAYS I LOVE YOUR POEM

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Linda Preston 09 April 2005

I like the opening line very much - that is a nice bit of internal rhyming. The rest is of course good too. Nice one.

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Lilian Marriage 07 April 2005

great words, warm and funny.

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