Scarborough Gypsy

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Cry For Me - Poem by Scarborough Gypsy

Cry for me, please cry for me,
I want you to feel hurt,
I want the pain to dig at you,
And make you feel like dirt

I hope your dreams are nightmares,
And all your days are bad,
I hope you’re never satisfied,
Just always feeling sad

I want you to feel miserable,
And never feel happy,
But most of all, in place of this,
I want you to want me.


Comments about Cry For Me by Scarborough Gypsy

  • Melvina Germain (3/26/2007 7:09:00 AM)

    Oh memories of the past, I too was there at one time. I'm so glad I grew up and realized this emotion was just a waste of time. We should enjoy any time that we had in a loving relationship and when things change and it no longer exists at least we can be grateful that it ever happened. You show a very true picture of the feelings of many. Excellent poem---Melvina--- (Report)Reply

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  • (10/1/2006 4:49:00 AM)

    This poem evokes an urge for me to cry. Though my tears would not be for you. They are for me. You have awaken a beast within me with this emotion-laden piece. I am with you as many could testify as well, the same. I am, and have been in this very place before. It can sometime feel like an old shoe and at others, like a shard of glass cutting across your heart. This poem was most powerful and your ability to capture so well the pain on paper is truly a talent. (Report)Reply

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  • (2/2/2006 6:27:00 PM)

    Been there, done that, and misery loves company. Keep writing, however. It eases the pain. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/25/2006 7:40:00 AM)

    Ouch broken hearts suck! What is that all about wanting to hurt someone you once (and sometimes still do) loved! ? Felt the same myself, Moyaxx (Report)Reply

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  • (1/24/2006 2:50:00 PM)

    I love it, I feel like that too sometimes!
    A great piece of work!

    Elya Thorn
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  • (11/2/2005 6:50:00 PM)

    pain is always a mystery
    and sometimes
    the conclusion is not what you expect
    good work
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  • Alice Vedral Rivera (7/3/2005 10:56:00 AM)

    We all want the person who broke our heart to suffer as we suffer. I like the way you express it in this poem. Most of all, I like the ending - so true.

    avr
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  • (4/4/2005 10:16:00 AM)

    It is an intense quagmire of misery, a broken heart. Of course there's pain, suffering.... in excruciating doses. I applaud your honesty. I will also be reading more of your poetry. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/25/2005 2:35:00 AM)

    A very honest poem. To me as a reader, it reinstates the fact of how intense our emotions can be at such a time as a broken marriage, etc. Now I'm going to read more of your poems... (Report)Reply

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  • (3/24/2005 12:27:00 AM)

    No Janice, not from my childhood. Though, it was interesting to hear how you had interpretted it. Though, I think that is the mother in you coming out. My inspiration here actually came from someone braking my heart and it was written for them. I wanted them to feel the pain I was going through.

    Cheers
    SC
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  • (3/23/2005 2:31:00 PM)

    This was one from your childhood I guess. It has the sound of a child who is crying out for love.? ? ? ? ?
    I may be way off here. Let me know.

    Gave you a ten
    Hugs
    Jan
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  • (3/21/2005 4:19:00 AM)

    Bittersweet, nice rhymes, nice poem
    Kenneth
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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 21, 2005

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 1, 2010


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