My Garden's Manicured Grass Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

My Garden's Manicured Grass

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My garden's manicured grass
Green envy's eyeballs carry,
And still seems nigh passé—
Like a lass looking dreary,
Dressed in robes so crass!
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Senryu | 19.01.2019 |

Thursday, May 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: grass ,green
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This one came in comparison to the piece titled ‘Golden Prairie Grass'.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 May 2019

So beautifully portrayed, interesting to read. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 May 2019

Thank you Kumarmani M, I must thank you for reading it.

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Jennifer Birchall 30 May 2019

Great expression in this poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 May 2019

Thanks Jennifer B.

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 May 2019

beautiful poetic expression on the green grass with a lass

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 May 2019

Thank you Mahtab Bangalee, if you've time do visit the other one on grass, 'Golden Prairie Grass'.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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