aung si myanmar


My Girl Friend - Poem by aung si myanmar

Her eyes are demure diamonds
Below the rainbows of eyebrows.

Her cheeks are twin rubies
With cute dimples in harmony.

Her lip is the rosy wine
That I sip with melody rhymes.

Her body is a charming verse
Full with the beauties of missing breath.

Her style is the latest brand
Similar with the fame of sun.

Her scent is sweet aroma
That I eagerly embrace forever.

She is only one my heart-star
That will shimmer after shimmer.


Comments about My Girl Friend by aung si myanmar

  • (10/6/2012 3:16:00 AM)


    Great words! Encore!
    Reading your poems makes my day!
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  • Grant Lovell (9/6/2012 7:50:00 PM)


    Excellent! well-crafted! Have fun, till the end! (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (8/30/2012 10:29:00 PM)


    super super 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan (8/24/2012 1:13:00 PM)


    Good rhyme and rhythm. Like it. Enjoy your girl friend. (Report) Reply

  • Eindaray Kyaw (8/24/2012 10:51:00 AM)


    Your words are really sharp and deep enough to describe your girl friend's beauty!
    You know, the verseHer lip is the rosy wine
    That I sip with melody rhymes.makes me smile!
    Your poem is also melodious like your girl's body! !
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  • (8/24/2012 2:30:00 AM)


    It seems that the person in your life means a lot too you, she seems to be a amazing person and you enjoy being in her company, you gave great descriptive words in that we get a real picture of this person who you are in love with (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 23, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, September 3, 2012


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