danyelle tedrow

My Happy Ness

my life was sad and alone till the day i meet you my soul was lost but you found it and you picked up the mess of my life and glued it back to gether you are the sun to my shine the beat to my heart your the one who made me smile and laugh you made me not so dark ene more

Poem Submitted: Monday, December 14, 2009

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  • Urshula DavisUrshula Davis (7/9/2011 6:31:00 PM)

    This is soo nice! ! i love it simple and plain!

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  • Romeo Della ValleRomeo Della Valle (6/29/2011 3:26:00 PM)

    Smiling is one of the secrets of happiness and you described very well in this excellent, well penned and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up! Hoping you can read and enjoy my poem titled: IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS whenever time permits. Love and Peace for always! ..

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  • Dillon Gay (7/20/2010 4:13:00 PM)

    Yeah, this reminds me of a couple people I've had in my life. Awwww......I miss them now......: (Oh, but great poem!

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  • Iron Panda 23™ (3/2/2010 2:47:00 PM)

    i likes this \^-^/
    it made the sun shine through dark clouds in my mind :)

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  • Ken E Hall (1/16/2010 1:05:00 AM)

    I'm late for a very important date...however your poem held me
    it is original only you seem to hide behind words I think you need an i in happiness metaphoricregardsy++++10
    regards

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  • John KnightJohn Knight (12/14/2009 3:44:00 PM)

    Hi Angel - This is much better glad I made you smile again
    Love you in Poetry - JOHN X

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