danyelle tedrow

The Rainy Day - Poem by danyelle tedrow

the sky is dark and deam the sweet smell of wet grass lengers around the smell reminds me of you the dark deam sky reminds me of you siting in the wet grass with out a care reminds me of you walken throw the rain reminds me of you siting on the porch drinken ice tea reminds me of you lisen to the rain reminds me of you every thing i do reminds me of you i remeber that dark and rainy night you called me and side its time im sorry and i love you i no what was going on by the time i got to your house it was to late i cant belive you did that the rain the dark deam shy maks me sad all the time but one thing i will all way remember that rainy night

Comments about The Rainy Day by danyelle tedrow

  • (7/20/2010 4:07:00 PM)

    Very good. It takes the dark, dismal side of love, and puts it in a physical place like a rainy day. Parts like 'sitting on the porch drinking iced tea' puts a clear image in my head of the life the people in the poem had together. (Report) Reply

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  • (3/2/2010 2:54:00 PM)

    what christopher said (he always says what i'd wanna say) .....well written! ! (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/26/2010 9:41:00 PM)

    The refreshing rain of remembrance is always rewarding. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (12/10/2009 10:55:00 PM)

    Written very well. Might suggest to set it out like a poem so it's easier to read. But still good work! Keep it up! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2009 3:50:00 PM)

    I like how everything ties together. Very cool. And I really like how the whole poem feels really dark and dismal. It sounded very sad though. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 7, 2009

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