My Heart Does Purr Poem by Douglas Alan Stromback

My Heart Does Purr

Rating: 4.5


my heart does purr
for visions of grandeur that's for sure
i have a need, for speed,
and the action, is my main attraction
sit still,
not me, it makes me ill.
i have to move all the time
and my words have to rhyme
my thoughts never stop,
and my eyes always shop.
i very seldom buy,
and a lot of things i am too afraid to try.
in my soul is fire,
and i hope to keep it right down to the end of the wire
i like to drive fast,
and i don't like coming in last.
fast like to skate,
i try not to hate
i try to forgive
as i live
but most of all i do,
look for what is true
i like my music loud
i enjoy a crowd
unless it is a traffic jam,
then i say damn
i like my coffee strong
sometimes i like to taste it all day long
most of all i like it black
and it gets my mind zooming on its racetrack
i like passion
it is my fashion
i like to feel the escalated heartbeat
to me that is a treat
i don't like to bunt
i would rather go for it on fourth down then punt
to me that is fun
i won't take a walk, but i'll take a base hit
i'll go for the steal to second, on first i won't sit
my heart does sing
to swing
in the end i'll just say i did it
and out of my soul i spit it.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
copyright 1999
Doug Stromback

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 07 May 2017

i have a need, for speed, and the action, is my main attraction in my soul is I like passion i try to forgivee, my heart does sing i did it at the end.. so many points did i try to get from your valuable and rich poem with rhymin words at the end……… thank you dear poet for this great poem. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 April 2017

An impressive one. Thanks.

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 January 2016

nd it gets my mind zooming on its racetrack i like passion it is my fashion i like to feel the escalated heartbeat. Realities of a young life, likes and dislikes, experiences of life. all described very well in this poem. thank you. tony

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Kelly Kurt 12 September 2015

A strongly written poem, Douglas. Thanks

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Roseann Shawiak 02 July 2015

Very enthusiastic and energetic poem, pretty much in line with what I like, speed, falling, loud music, all the worthwhile and free things in this life. Adrenaline rush, nothing quite as exciting as it in life! Your poem raced through my mind while leaving lots of mind candy to savor for later. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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