My Journey- 01 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

My Journey- 01

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The snail within me
has finally come up
With a new resolution...
To pace with the world
in and around me.

No more withdrawals,
No more repentances,
No more worries nor woes,
No more competition..
For I have my journey
On a path of my own,
Chosen to tread on,
Committed to go along
Till the last sunset here
Till the last gush of air
Exit my shell.

Saturday, August 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: journeys,soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A reader 11 August 2018

An excellent poem! Thanks for sharing!

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Rajendra Rout 29 October 2018

No more withdrawals, No more repentances, No more worries nor woes, No more competition.. Lovely line I enjoy this poem Thanku sir for sharing this lovely poem 10+++++

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 29 October 2018

THIS IS A NICE POEM. I REALLY ENJOYED THIS. THANK YOU SIR.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 29 October 2018

THIS IS A NICE POEM. REALLY I ENJOYED THIS.THANK YOU SIR.

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Abhipsa Panda 06 October 2018

very nicely written sir...A totally fine write....

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Suratha Kumar Rout 06 October 2018

Nice! Thanks for sharing. 10+++++++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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