My Life Is In My Fellows Poem by Liza Sud

My Life Is In My Fellows

Rating: 5.0


I feel - my life is in my fellows now,
that's how you should teach people from their childfhood.
Then all the wars will come to end at last,
and the whole world will be as point in my heart.

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вся жизнь моя в товарищах теперь,
так надо объяснять всем с детства,
тогда закончатся все войны на земле,
и будет мир, как точка в сердце.

Monday, March 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fellow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 19 March 2016

just want to be clear about this poem: Your resolution is to follow Love Your Neighbor as Yourself. Your resolution is even more emphatic: You will devote your life to them, which goes beyond Jesus's teachings to an IMITATION of his life. Tarkovsky's film made in Italy called NOSTALGHIA has this theme, The lead character mumbles to himself Not just for me...Not anymore. It was only in my second viewing I caught that moment. This man is not shown praying because he turns his whole life into a prayer.In his last film the main character makes himself The Sacrifice. Those are extreme examples but our age is so secular a religious message has to be shouted loudly to be heard.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 14 March 2016

Then all the wars will come to end at last And the whole world will be as point in my heart. The concept of universal brotherhood is superb. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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