The value of god,
Which is actually as lord.
They fly as bee,
But they never see.
God is alive,
Good things will relive.
Whom we believe,
Whether god or science alive.
Peoples wants to go to meet to god,
If it possible with lift,
Because god precious gift,
Otherwise god will rude and rift.
And if they will worry,
Then there will god discovery.
So, love to god is necessary,
Because there is many god adversary.
For earth's nourishment,
And for people's advancement,
Except God's dominant,
And say'My lord, Oh my God'.
We are just a speck in the all pervading God in the Universe! Sans his mercy Earth won't be there and our advancement also won't be possible sure! Keep it up!
For earth's nourishment, And for people's advancement, Except God's dominant, And say'My lord, Oh my God'. i like the rhythmic endings...... you have worked a lot to write this poem with such endings of the lines... very impressive..... yes God is everything we have to cry every dusk and dawn, my Lord my God....... very nice poem, very spiritual in its content. thank you dear poetess. tony
Excellent., Very spiritual in its content. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it
For earth's nourishment, And for people's advancement, Except God's dominant, And say'My lord, Oh my God'. very nice poem calling the reader to come to faith in the one only God Lord of heaven and earth...... tony
I love Christian poems, and I love this one. I rate this poem a 10
I taught World Religions for twelve years; it was a very popular course. Scholars list six religions as World Religions but there are are at least 2000 smaller religions. So being religious is a vital part of being human. I read your poem very carefully and it strikes me as first a sincere prayer, and second as a prayer that any and all religious people could recite. It has that universal quality of saying what brings us together. For example, we can all agree that prayer nourishes the earth with respect and advances people spiritually (last stanza) .
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
We should God because He loves us 70 times more than our mothers. Thanks