Try to make good your life,
Try to make good your likes,
Try to make good your choice.
There are good adequacy,
There are bad adversary.
Try to make others happy,
With your humanity.
Try to make others humanity,
With your affinity.
To be a good
We have to give food to poor,
To be a adamanter
We have to be a helper.
If you see anyone in problem,
Make a photo in mind album.
If you have ability,
Help with your affability.
Otherwise you are a cheater,
Who cheat themselves life.
By Shipra singh
If you have ability, Help with your affability. yes you are portaying a great truth dear Poet. yes we are called by God to love, to show affinity especially to the poor and needy. thank you dear poet. tony
Wonderful truth in simple words.! YES we need Integrity in our Behavior! these Lines.. f you see anyone in problem, Make a photo in mind album. If you have ability, Help with your affability. Perfectly expressed in simple plea! Thank you Poet! ! 10++++!
Helping tendency is the first need of a human to help humanity to live in good condition! Nice one to read!
Try to make others happy, With your humanity. Try to make others humanity, With your affinity...the need of love, the need of nearness and affection........ very fine poem my dear poetess. your vision at your young age reveals so much of goodness in you. be great. tony
Your topic you identified as MORALITY: it is the moral force of AFFINITY which you highlight and I agree completely. It's the awareness that we are one human race and share this planet as our common home. That's why we care about each other. And that's why a poet in America reads poems by a poet in India, YOU HAVE WRITTEN THE TRUTH, SHIPRA, AND SHOW US WE NEED TO SAVE THE BEAUTY OF THE EARTH, BECAUSE IT IS OUR BEAUTY AS HUMAN BEINGS.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An other good effort. Thanks