This poem is a Malayan Pantoum. The Rhyming Pattern is A1 B 1 A2 B2
B1 C1 B2 C2 C1 D1 C2 D2...........etc Ending with A2 A1. Th Rhyming Pattern will be apparent when you read the poem. It does not ciover much ground and in the end (like true love) it comes back to the beginning!
My love for you will never ever change
It's set in stone - but very soft my heart,
A love that fate can never rearrange
Our love that nought can ever tear apart.
It's set in stone - but very soft my heart
My love's complete - no change with age or time,
Our love that nought can ever tear apart
That makes us one until the end of time.
My love's complete - no change with age or time
A love too deep and pure for mortal man,
That makes us one until the end of time
Eternal love beyond an Angel's span.
A love too deep and pure for mortal man
Our love that beats inside - two hearts as one,
Eternal love beyond an Angel's span
Such love remains when other loves have gone.
Our love that beats inside - two hearts as one
Our love that overcomes all doubts and fears
Such love remains when other loves have gone
A love that dries our bleakest saddest tears!
A love that fate can never rearrange
My love for you will never ever change!
A P E R F E C T L O V E / an Amorous Poem/ the structure makes it more and more splendid
oh! , what a poem, romantic also so very hilarious nice piece luwi
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful, as ever - and i love the style and structure of it. I remain in awe of your work :)