My Love Story....... Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

My Love Story.......

Rating: 5.0


Where do I start my love story
What you want to know about my love story
How can I tell about my sad love story
When I start to tell then my tears roll down
She was there always for me like an angel
I could hold her in my arm
I could hug her with my heart
I could kiss her tenderly
She gave her unconditional love with passion
She was the world to me
I have walked with her every moment and
the mountains and oceans opened their heart for us
What a wonderful day when I was with her
Those days were the best days of my life
But till the Satan separated me from her
I did not know that her sickness will end her life
She can not see the tears in my eyes
neither the pain in my heart that cries for her everyday
My love story ends into an incomplete story.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepti Agarwal 02 November 2009

a sad tale.. but love never ends.. it stays alive in heart n soul.. it knows no boundaries.. of bodies or physical sense it is just there even if that soul is not in physical form 'Love' is always there.. :)

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Marieta Maglas 02 November 2009

Ravi, it is a very sad love story, a very touching poem.Still think that this love is eternal and you will never forget these already lived moments.There are so many people who never meet love in their life. very well written poem. 10++++++++++ Mari

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Anju Addanki 01 November 2009

A very touchy one. thats all i can say too emotional.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 31 October 2009

A VERY MOVING POEM...AND SINCE YOUR STORY YOU HAVE BREATHED YOUR SIGH INTO IT...THIS SADNESS IS DEFINITELY HEAVY..OVERNIGHT BECOMING A LONER IS VERY HARD TO TAKE...AT LEAST WE PEOPLE AR ABLE TO EXPRESS... TAKE CARE

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Surya . 31 October 2009

ravi you have penned a beautiful and touching poem.congrats, voted10 surya

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Rajeshnayak 13 February 2018

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Rini Shibu 31 August 2017

So sad love story but very well written

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Fatma Maleta 11 December 2015

Wow this is very beautiful but very sad hope wherever she is she is fine and realizes how lucky she was

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Omar Ibrahim 05 November 2009

no don't cry! just remember the sweet moments.......it's touching but wonderful poem....sure she knows that you are crying for her and so does she....so don't cry and write a poem about her saying that you will never forget her and reminding her of your sweet moments....

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Seema Chowdhury 03 November 2009

very nice but surely sad. i wish her and you, both well. everyone has a story to share in life. thanks for sharing yours. take care

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