My Mind And Me Poem by Llewellyn Douglas

My Mind And Me

Rating: 5.0


Many questions on my mind
The answers so difficult to find
Everyday so tired of thinking
About the same thing

The challenges coming my way
Knowing they not there to stay
Preparing me to be strong
No matter the time short or long

Get up, go to work, eat sleep
How boring to sow and reap
In such a manner like this
It's so wrong it's craziness

Time so precious, life so short
Wipe your eyes, everything gone
Years gone by and really forgot
That they went through, such a lot

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 16 September 2024

Most deserving as The Member Poem Of The Day chosen by Poem Hunter and Team. TOP Marks for this brilliant gem, yes, a GEM! CONGRATULATIONS, dear Poet and Hearty Welcom to Poem Hunter Poetry Site. Keep creating!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 September 2024

The intricacies of life is vividly depicted in this wonderful poem. Well expressed. Congratulations for having this poem as Member Poem Of The Day.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 16 September 2024

Congratulations dear poet. This poem is selected Poem of The Day today. Great achievement

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 September 2024

TWO: in the last sentence is very philosophical, really a cute masterpiece, you are very welcome on Poem Hunter Poetry Site, dear poet It's really an intelligent poem! Congratulations on the choice of Poem Hunter and Team as The Member Poem Of The Day. This poem goes to MyFavourites

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 September 2024

ONE: A very cleverly constructed poem, it seems written with simple words, but in the meantime, it is very cleverly constructed, with good end-rhymes and the answer

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 September 2024

This poem goes toMyFavourites. Thank you for sharing!

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