My Mistake Poem by Ana Z. M.

My Mistake

Rating: 5.0


I think I'm making the biggest mistake,
It feels so wonderful when I tell you I love you,
but so empty and disappointing,
when after this, I can only remember HIS name.

Oh! I'm crying so hard,
this was my mistake,
I shouldn't have fallen in love that way,
and now my mistake made you happy.

Be happy, you deserve it,
my love you do,
but i don't,
I made the biggesst mistake for you.

This is so wrong,
this is not correct,
I love HIM and I love you,
What can I do?

This is a mess,
the one I've created by myself.
My darling be happy,
don't be disapointed by these words.

Everything was too soon,
no time to forget him,
and here I am making amendments,
to you my dear, if I hurt you.

Yes HE left me behind,
a while ago,
but HE didn't depart from my heart,
and forgetting him is something I wish to do.

This is my biggest mistake,
letting you enter my heart,
believing you were going to collect the broken pieces,
but I've created bunch of new pieces.

My darling be happy,
this doesn't mean I don't love you,
I warned you before,
and here I am afer making the biggest mistake I've ever made.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darkness J 03 February 2009

I just came to live it deeply when reading it. A mixure of unexplained feelings. So touching! Keep writing!

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Angel Jimenez 12 January 2009

Im the one who made a big mistake. Sorry for everything ive done.

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Bonnie Collins 09 January 2009

Very touching write with so many confusing emotions at play.. Love isnt always the way we dream it, nor is it at times the way we want it to be.... Things happen in life for a reason...... Very insightfull of a mixed emotional roller coster... Bonnie

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