My Mistress Eyebrows Poem by Vishal Sharma
My Mistress Eyebrows
Once
A longest river came between us
and, i made a long insane jump among waters
and, you know, water cried for their lives
and sheding tears, they made themselves ugly
then I told them their guilt, coming between us
My days are spending these days
Under the shade of my mistress eyebrows.
few mistakes are there, long river instead of longest. and add apostrophe in mistress.
The usage of imagery, metaphor of river and the central idea is really awesome.No insanity, it happens.10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 3:54:47 PM # 1.0.0.1119
river is a great metaphor. A lovely write