With pride in your eyes
and love in your heart and
with honor by your side
You go to fight
fight for you country
fight for your family
When you go off to war
you'll obey orders from other
so obey mine dear, don't die!
For with you gone the
sun would lose it's shine
the flowers would wilt
For memories would last for a moment
before they start to rapidly fade all though
my love would remain with you forever
if you where to die
my heart would lay next to you
in your dark casket
oh my brave solider
come back home to me do not
force me to live without you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like the message in this one. How about making it more personal by relating yourself to the soldier, or describing how brave the soldier is, and contrasting it with the cruelty of war?