Brittney Pennington

Rookie - 144 Points (19/12/1991 / Crourd 'd lane)

Painful Goodbye - Poem by Brittney Pennington

Tears form in my heart
Silent roll down my cheek
Stopping gently on the lips
That will never know your kiss
I said goodbye when I didn't mean it
Now I must bury the truth deep inside my soul
For my love must never be revealed

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Painful Goodbye by Brittney Pennington

  • Chinedu Dike (9/21/2014 1:11:00 AM)

    You captured the intimacy, the pain, during and after saying goodbye. An insightful and beautifully penned piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.10 marks for you. (Report) Reply

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  • (4/22/2014 12:56:00 PM)

    I almost cried it's so painful ...keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Shania K. Younce (4/17/2014 11:24:00 PM)

    This is well written poem. Bien! (Report) Reply

  • Aries Profanisaurus (4/17/2014 4:47:00 PM)

    A good play on words used here. Maybe the person who this is about should read this and know how you feel. Strong write (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (4/14/2014 10:19:00 AM)

    You play with words very well, keep on writing and be stronger too_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (4/14/2014 7:34:00 AM)

    A painful but very passionate write. Feeling
    the pain of an unpleasant goodbye. Very heartfelt.
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  • C. P. Sharma (4/13/2014 11:09:00 PM)

    Deep agony of parting and a sense of repentance is ruefully reflected in this poem. I love it. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammad Skati (4/13/2014 6:41:00 PM)

    I loved your poems, so I translated THE PAINFUL GOODBYE and I LOVE YOU THROUGH THE DARK. You are a great poetess. Bravo. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Jesus James Llorico (4/13/2014 10:41:00 AM)

    Beautiful description of painful feeling of regret. (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde (4/13/2014 10:29:00 AM)

    .......a deep soulful write, sometimes love is hidden deep inside our heart, but we are afraid of unleash the truth............the pain and anxiety, then slowly eats us from inside...............lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (4/13/2014 10:06:00 AM)

    I said goodbye when I didn't mean it
    Love's deep secret beautifully expressed in the poem.
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  • V P Mahur (4/13/2014 9:35:00 AM)

    Dear Brittney,
    The poem reveals the sorrowful feels of love in an impressive way. Your heart is so soft to feel the gloom of love so deeply. I can understand. Thanks!
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 13, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, April 14, 2014

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