Painful Goodbye Poem by Brittney Miller

Painful Goodbye

Rating: 4.3


Tears form in my heart
Silent roll down my cheek
Stopping gently on the lips
That will never know your kiss
I said goodbye when I didn't mean it
Now I must bury the truth deep inside my soul
For my love must never be revealed

Sunday, April 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 April 2014

I said goodbye when I didn't mean it Love's deep secret beautifully expressed in the poem.

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Mohammad Skati 13 April 2014

I loved your poems, so I translated THE PAINFUL GOODBYE and I LOVE YOU THROUGH THE DARK. You are a great poetess. Bravo. Thanks.

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Patricia Grantham 14 April 2014

A painful but very passionate write. Feeling the pain of an unpleasant goodbye. Very heartfelt.

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Unwritten Soul 14 April 2014

You play with words very well, keep on writing and be stronger too_Soul

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Shania K. Younce 17 April 2014

This is well written poem. Bien!

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Chifuniro Mgunda 06 May 2020

nice piece love the emotion captured within the flow

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Chifuniro Mgunda 19 October 2018

Beautifully done...love the emotion within

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Benjamin Uy 07 September 2018

A good poem about goodbyes and burying the past A sad poem and first rate

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Chinedu Dike 21 September 2014

You captured the intimacy, the pain, during and after saying goodbye. An insightful and beautifully penned piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.10 marks for you.

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Ambitious Blessing 22 April 2014

I almost cried it's so painful ...keep it up

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