My Payroll, Pulse And The Puncture Poem by nimal dunuhinga

My Payroll, Pulse And The Puncture

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Oh! it's a sad tune as usual
When I touch these colored notes
The burning sensation what a pity?
My poor lungs try to fill happy air,
But always a puncture along this tiresome journey from a cruel thorn?
I am not a stripling to bear this stretch
And this tattered piece would break if you pull fast.

* The annoyed alarm clock wakes me up to fight with the life.

Thursday, March 12, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: journey,sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 20 March 2009

Your share the angst of your age with remarkable verbal agility, Nimal. Another creative gem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 13 March 2009

Very few people enjoy the sound of an alarm clock. Ironic since it serves a useful purpose. Good write, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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