My Perceptions Poem by ritwika raha

My Perceptions

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As clean, as beautiful
The mirror, I saw
The crafted grandeur
Beauty gorged of flaw.

I tried to chase,
The world so bright
But each time I leapt
They showed me fright

I tried to see,
The vial of life
But the eyes grew weary
And just saw strife

I tried to clasp,
The wind and sail
But the galloping waves
And the tearing gale…

I tried to mount,
My thoughts on steed
But every thought
Was struck and it did bleed! !

I tried to tread,
With the crowd rampant
I was clenched, and I gasped
In the crowd nonchalant! !


I raised my brows,
To catch the long straight street
But it showed me just
A fragment of it! !

I tried to ti, e
The chords of despair and hope
But nothing could mend
This broken rope.

I dropped down battered
In pieces, in shards
Narrow hopes all cleaved
All reveries marred.

It was the mirror
I saw till then
The truth, its twin and…
Betwixt a narrow glen! ! !

All this while
I played a child! ! !
Sporting folly,
And reveries wild…

-Ritwika Raha

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deo Inji 15 August 2012

Excellently written with a good taste of anaphora. Great job there Ritwika (unique name) ! ! !

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Kelly Seale 09 August 2012

Beautiful flow of words, Very well penned! Great Ink! -Kelly.

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Zaid Akhtar 09 August 2012

wow... amazing! ! i can actually feel a rhythm, , something like a music tune while reading ur work! ! marvelous! ! :)

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Indranil Bhaduri 09 August 2012

Superbly penned. Excellent use of words. Thank you for gifting such a nice poem.

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Tapas Baidya 02 August 2012

Life is a beautiful journey that reflected in our own mirror. Thanks for sharing. Tapas, West Bengal, India

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