My Precious Days Poem by sangeetha gopalakrishnan

My Precious Days

Rating: 5.0


My Precious days are my birthdays... I can never forget them... Not just me can you? ? ? I will be so so happy when i get my new dress...The most unforgetfull moment is when i cut the cake and my parents giving me the first piece of it and clicking photos my mind will be as cool as ice... After that i will be waiting for new gifts from my friends and relatives and taking pictures.... While playing various games with my friends in my mind it is like i should be the winner atleast in one game.... later on while giving gifts to my friends i will be so happy that i am able to give some gifts to my friends... But i will be only unhappy for one think that after each birthday i will be missing my childhood......Its not my fault everyone will be thinking like that.......don't we? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

abeautiful ending...like the conclusion of your beautiful day.. like that the wise people think, , well done

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Vinod Kumar 04 July 2009

Nice begining and Look surroundings, the nature, the birds, the animals, the people, and write more, thanks,10.

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Aiswarya. T.anish 02 July 2009

Yeah.......its not our fault that we miss our childhood. Noone can give back childhood. So, make much of our precious time of childhood, because once they are gone they do not come back, they only leave their shadows- sweet memories. Good write.......I love my birthdays too....because I've been blessed to live in this beautiful world.10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 02 July 2009

good write! I am giving you 10+

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Dr.subhendu Kar 01 July 2009

after each birthday i will be missing my childhood quite passionate as we trudge ahead by our age, eloquent write too, yet introspective,10+, thanks for sharing

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