Liza Sud

My Rose - Poem by Liza Sud

You have touched my rose by your words,
And its edges grew up so sharp,
it wants you inside – or it hurts,
And without you it may die.

But more hurts when she is unveiled,
Non-transparent white skirt.
Cause it is an eternal rose,
and it wants to entwine with God.

Моя роза

Ты задел мою розу словами,
и края ее стали остры,
и ее очень больно ранит,
если нету тебя внутри.

но больнее ей - быть раскрытой,
непрозрачен белый подол,
Хочет с Господом вечным слиться,
и любить ее хочет - Бог!

Topic(s) of this poem: rose

Comments about My Rose by Liza Sud

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/8/2015 11:59:00 PM)

    Superb poem, Nicely written, LOVED IT Liza. (Report) Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (11/7/2015 2:19:00 AM)

    it is a lovely write Liza :) (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/6/2015 12:55:00 PM)

    Eternal rose likes to unite with God is the symbol of pure mind and purity. Interesting poem shared for nice reading...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 6, 2015

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 15, 2015

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