My Small Loving Little Hut Poem by Amitava Sur

My Small Loving Little Hut

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My small loving little hut on a river bank,
Quiet flows the river, in the wood nearby.
The hut, amidst a lush green lawn
With many a flower like -
Lily, daisy and roses, quite a lot.
My little stable with pony & pigs,
The flower ivy creeps in walls-
Clustering my hut with love, joy and peace.

Moon rises in the wood nearby
Flooding my hut with cool divine light.
Mild breeze blows over the little inn
Spreading a fragrance of tranquility all over it,
It whispers in my ear round -
Saying, happiness for us it brought along.

Full moon in the star studded sky
Brings down the cheer and made it divine.
Night engulfs with crickets' cry
Fireflies glow in the dead of night.

Embracing my beloved and caressing her
Two souls unite with divine love.
The loving moon from the clear sky
Peeps in With a naughty smile.
Happiness surrounds the small little inn,
We two in that small haven were closer to heaven.

Quiet flows the river, in the wood nearby
The dream comes true in the dead of night.
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Amitava (17.07.2013)

Wednesday, September 25, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It tells about an ideal shelter where you feel thrilled with peace and tranquility.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 16 May 2014

Peace and tranquility have definitely been entered into this haven of poetical essence. Rhythmically flowing with the river, two hearts being embraced and loved with the incessant tempo of nature. Absolute wonderful interlude of love, thank you for allowing this look into your dear hearts. RoseAnn

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Sonali Ganguly 13 March 2014

beautifully pen-pictured, most probably every heart aspires for such a divenly blessed love & untrodden peace, very well-written.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 08 February 2014

A great imagery with lots of love, peace and tranquility flowing and nurturing the haven to be ultimately a heaven.....very divinely indeed...........

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Valsa George 02 October 2013

A beautiful small haven on the bank of a river with idyllic setting, housing two souls bonded in love can be nothing short of a miniature paradise on Earth! Let your dream come true! On one side a river and on the other side the verdant woods... A lovely location! Enjoyed! !

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Patricia Grantham 26 September 2013

All I can just say is beautiful my friend. A mans home is his castle. This is very true in your case here. Surrounded by the lovely array of flowers, lush greenery and a flowing river. Made even more divine being with the one that you love. Very passionate..

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