My Smile Poem by Louis Cecile

My Smile

Rating: 5.0


I can’t smile anymore

I look around waiting for the sound

True nature surrounds a moment for bliss

I still look around waiting for a sound

I can’t smile anymore

A story told in prism reveals the same omega

Striving through this saga realising we have yet to reach potential

I can’t smile anymore

Repetitive strain

Daily repetition

I seek a new high where is the astral plane

Same faces seeking new places

I can’t smile anymore

Where is the respect

They cannot see regret

Attain for what

Look for meaning when permanently forgot

I can’t smile anymore

God save me

Spirit cleanse me

Split faces reside on holy ground

Commandments of choice

Do we really listen to the voice

I can’t smile anymore

Look for happiness

Look for wealth

Look of love

We look below continue a search where there is nowhere to go

I can’t smile anymore

They are better

She is fatter

Oh you really care and ask what is the matter

I can afford

Yet still we are bored

Seek the umbilical cord

We don’t really smile anymore

Tuesday, January 12, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: smile
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

'Do we really listen to the voice'... thats why we can't smile why boredom nicely painted tenner ~ Regards ~ niv ===== Thanks for comment on my poem Please read and comment on my poem [read a protest] ‘Ogling Orgy’… Thanks …..sorry for belated comment

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Kesav Easwaran 15 May 2010

'We look below continue a search where there is nowhere to go...' sensitive sensible words...liked the poem...the presentation poignancy and the style...10

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