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Acceptance

Rating: 4.9

Infectious smile has infected tears
The laughter strikes with spears
I am not dear and they are not sincere
Feeling fear
I must perform
For when I stop the stage is gone

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Awesome flow in this great poem and the rhyme is good too... Siya_! !

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Heyyou Boy 09 January 2012

Short and to the point. I like these. Great poem

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Vipins Puthooran 01 October 2011

Magnificient poem... I like the rhyme in it.... Well written...poignant write

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Allemagne Roßmann 18 September 2011

Truly said and very heartfelt expressions to endear the readers with impressionism.I liked it

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Swarnendu Biswas 10 August 2011

nice expression, few words it contains but extensive sense it creates.nice work, keep writing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 April 2016

They are not sincere! Thanks for sharing.

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Leslie Philibert 16 March 2014

Like this, with its clever internal rhyme in L3...good work.

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Imaginative imagery implodes in powerful poem. Well done my friend.

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Hardik Vaidya 16 March 2013

Louis Ceclile this is an epic, very well felt at your end, the beauty of any poem is not in into construct, it lies in the poets intellectual grasp through his soul. Very well done.

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Marieta Maglas 04 June 2012

Noble feelings very well expressed in this great poem-thank you for sharing.

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