Acceptance Poem by Louis Cecile


Rating: 4.9

Infectious smile has infected tears
The laughter strikes with spears
I am not dear and they are not sincere
Feeling fear
I must perform
For when I stop the stage is gone

Heyyou Boy 09 January 2012

Short and to the point. I like these. Great poem

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 25 May 2012

Awesome flow in this great poem and the rhyme is good too... Siya_! !

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Marieta Maglas 04 June 2012

Noble feelings very well expressed in this great poem-thank you for sharing.

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You have said so much in so few words. Sincere acceptance is food for the soul. Well done my friend.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 September 2010

‘I must perform /For when I stop the stage is gone’ ~ Like mythological sphinx who rose from ashes and started flying …bytes of teaching in economy great write… thanks for sharing Hon'ble Poet Louis Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Maria Mitea 01 June 2022

Great Poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 April 2016

They are not sincere! Thanks for sharing.

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Leslie Philibert 16 March 2014

Like this, with its clever internal rhyme in L3...good work.

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Imaginative imagery implodes in powerful poem. Well done my friend.

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Hardik Vaidya 16 March 2013

Louis Ceclile this is an epic, very well felt at your end, the beauty of any poem is not in into construct, it lies in the poets intellectual grasp through his soul. Very well done.

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