Saturday, January 9, 2010


Rating: 4.9
Infectious smile has infected tears
The laughter strikes with spears
I am not dear and they are not sincere
Feeling fear
I must perform
For when I stop the stage is gone
Louis Cecile
Edward Kofi Louis 04 April 2016
They are not sincere! Thanks for sharing.
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Leslie Philibert 16 March 2014
Like this, with its clever internal rhyme in L3...good work.
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Imaginative imagery implodes in powerful poem. Well done my friend.
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Hardik Vaidya 16 March 2013
Louis Ceclile this is an epic, very well felt at your end, the beauty of any poem is not in into construct, it lies in the poets intellectual grasp through his soul. Very well done.
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Marieta Maglas 04 June 2012
Noble feelings very well expressed in this great poem-thank you for sharing.
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Awesome flow in this great poem and the rhyme is good too... Siya_! !
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Rekha Mandagere 26 April 2012
Excellent write. there is nice flow and rhythm here :)
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Arild Ertsland 16 March 2012
Awesome rhyming a very smooth flow in your poem, Louis.Outstanding work! Arild
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Lawrence H 16 March 2012
Louis, nice and very good rhyme poem. Is this a Haiku poem?
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Ramesh Rai 13 February 2012
xlent. i liked it.For when I stop the stage is gone
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