Infectious smile has infected tears
The laughter strikes with spears
I am not dear and they are not sincere
Feeling fear
I must perform
For when I stop the stage is gone
Awesome flow in this great poem and the rhyme is good too... Siya_! !
Noble feelings very well expressed in this great poem-thank you for sharing.
You have said so much in so few words. Sincere acceptance is food for the soul. Well done my friend.
‘I must perform /For when I stop the stage is gone’ ~ Like mythological sphinx who rose from ashes and started flying …bytes of teaching in economy great write… thanks for sharing Hon'ble Poet Louis Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Like this, with its clever internal rhyme in L3...good work.
Imaginative imagery implodes in powerful poem. Well done my friend.
Louis Ceclile this is an epic, very well felt at your end, the beauty of any poem is not in into construct, it lies in the poets intellectual grasp through his soul. Very well done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Short and to the point. I like these. Great poem