My Star Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

My Star

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You may be feeling sad and lonely
As I too was depressed heavily
It is not one way as you think
We got to be together to swim and sink

You have gone at the far end
And I miss you as close friend
A friend of distinct value
I had no such occasion to view

People may be unfortunate
To think of such person and relate
It is decided on this holy land
Where you and I are more than friend

I can see you from distance
Like shining star at once
But same distance has made me to feel
The loneliness is likely to kill

Same space and same timing
Your deep breath is not trimming
It goes up and down
That is cause of worry to be known

I requested the clouds
If they could be of some help to go on round
They will carry my message
The letter or imprint written on golden page

Few tear drops have fallen
To make reading as if unwritten
Read it carefully to know the sad plight
Rush to me immediately if you think it right

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 August 2013

You may be feeling sad and lonely As I too was depressed heavily

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Tameeka Smith 11 August 2013

Awesome poem! ! ! ! I really enjoyed it! ! ! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 August 2013

Beautiful poem especially reading the last stanza..rush to me immediately if u think right.. Well written..loved reading it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 August 2013

Some Girl A beautiful piece, one of my favourites from you. Recommended

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 August 2013

Get with People of Jesus Fred Lassonde2 minutes ago Seek a Bible believeing Main Line Christian Church even thoigh ther eprobably will be some spiritually dead people there -Jesus came for all of us who would seek Him- He would have come for you if yo were the only person on Earth. So please you do not need to be lonely nor do you need to go without fellowship. GOd loves you and there are those others who will too! God bless you! :) Comment +1 nice job

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 August 2013

Tom Robason3 minutes ago passionate and heartfelt work

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