My Unborn Self Poem by Prabir Gayen

My Unborn Self

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My Unborn Self

Who is there inside my Being!
Small inaudible voice do I hear,
Voice is like weeping to come out,
Voice is without word and speech,
Who is there floating in the stream!
Sea without water, sea of Nothing,
Who is there in my self poignant,
Nothing yet Everything, Soul of my Mind,
Who is the 'Like me' and yet no form!
Who is You to make me dry with pain,
Without making a small gesture to me,
Who is so loving and caring having no form!
Who you are to me and I am to you?
Let me die Peacefully without that
deep voice of mine,
Without that deep urge to be mine,
In the deepest state of being,
That voice is my 'Little Me'
Unmanifest and unborn self,
The me of my Solitary Being,
The extension of My dream,
my being to be born yet unborn.

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@Prabir Gayen - 31/03/2019 -2: 17 AM.

My Unborn Self
Saturday, March 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 30 March 2019

A wonderful piece of work Prabir!

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Prabir Gayen 30 March 2019

Thanks dear friend.....//////

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Haruna Garba 30 March 2019

That is the real you. Thanks for sharing.

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Prabir Gayen 30 March 2019

Great to have you as my friend.... thanks

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 30 March 2019

a beautiful and very thoughtful poem that gives the message of never to stop in life and always be ready to go on. this poem remindes me of Judith Wright's poem Woman to Man by its language and great usage of paradoxes.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 April 2019

Soul of my mind! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Namita Rani Panda 02 April 2019

The unborn voice is voiced beautifully.

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M Asim Nehal 31 March 2019

Your legacy, they will bear the torch and will march to next gen. Lovely poem PG.10+

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Srijita Mondal 31 March 2019

Brilliantly written poem to describe unmanifested pain or pain for unmanifestation..

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Srijita Mondal 31 March 2019

Cute picture of Rudra and his little sister Aradhya

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