My Vaporized Tears Comments
My vaporized tears have made the sky cloudy
It is shedding raindrops on the thirsty land
My thousands of sigh have turned into gusty winds
It is shaking the branches of the mango trees
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I love your poem. It has excellent wording, flow, personification and imagery.
really fantastic...great thought and thanks to invite me to read it... »so close«
You have beautifully expressed the great, great potential of human beings. In general this potential is always with us all which is kept in latent stage, it is an pity, you will agree with me. Very musical, the imagery used is supberb. Thanks for sharing.
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12/6/2025 2:17:49 AM # 1.0.0
My vaporized tears have made the sky cloudy My thousands of sigh have turned into gusty winds My unfulfilled wishes have become waves of the sea My old days have become colorful butterflies My some lost hopes have become a flock of cranes Wonderful idea! Your ink flowing is quite interesting.Well done! ! !