My World. Poem by Natasha Wellington

My World.

Rating: 5.0


My World Is Spinning Round And Round,
Im Feeling So Confused,
For After All Thats Happened,
My Hearts Still Feeling bruised.

& When i Think about the Past,
& Look What I Have Gained,
I Wonder If Its Worth The Fight,
My Hurt Has Still Ramined.

I Want My Wounds To Heal Again,
I Want To Be Alright,
But By myself, I Just Can't Bear,
To Stand Alone And Fight.

I Wish Someone Could Stand With Me,
& Help Me To Survive,
So, If My Fire Of Hope runs Down,
They'll Keep The Flame Alive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reylan Loberternos 11 July 2009

Maybe you're just looking too far away... nice read by the way.

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Broken Heart 16 July 2009

nyc poem! ! really liked it! ! 10+++

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Timothy Hector 14 July 2009

amazing... worded perfectly. if only i could write that well

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 July 2009

finely written..........................10+

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John Smith 11 July 2009

Wow, this is a beautiful poem with lovely rhythm and flow.

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Sayz LFlynn 11 July 2009

'& Help Me To Survive, So, If My Fire Of Hope runs Down, They'll Keep The Flame Alive' Brill poem 10++

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