My World. Poem by Natasha Wellington

My World.

Rating: 5.0


My World Is Spinning Round And Round,
Im Feeling So Confused,
For After All Thats Happened,
My Hearts Still Feeling bruised.

& When i Think about the Past,
& Look What I Have Gained,
I Wonder If Its Worth The Fight,
My Hurt Has Still Ramined.

I Want My Wounds To Heal Again,
I Want To Be Alright,
But By myself, I Just Can't Bear,
To Stand Alone And Fight.

I Wish Someone Could Stand With Me,
& Help Me To Survive,
So, If My Fire Of Hope runs Down,
They'll Keep The Flame Alive.

Saturday, July 11, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: confused,wounds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reylan Loberternos 11 July 2009

Maybe you're just looking too far away... nice read by the way.

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Broken Heart 16 July 2009

nyc poem! ! really liked it! ! 10+++

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Timothy Hector 14 July 2009

amazing... worded perfectly. if only i could write that well

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 July 2009

finely written..........................10+

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John Smith 11 July 2009

Wow, this is a beautiful poem with lovely rhythm and flow.

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Sayz LFlynn 11 July 2009

'& Help Me To Survive, So, If My Fire Of Hope runs Down, They'll Keep The Flame Alive' Brill poem 10++

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