Myre's Mire Poem by Clive Culverhouse

Myre's Mire

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they wanted my eyes
they wanted to see what I had seen
they longed to see what I had seen
to know how I laid bare my step
on sugar path
on foaming hill
in raging twist
against the wind
to throw my stones across the land
to walk, as I, deluded

there was a house of wood and stone
a sign outside
its name, my dream
and know not I why this I saw
scratched in by nails
fingers raw
read 'Myre's Mire'
bloodied

within that house lived all the world
lived everyone who'd ever lived
breathed everyone who'd ever breathed
and wait, they sat in harmony
while I, outside
dare not go in
was I outside mistakenly?

they wanted my eyes
they wanted to see what I had seen
and all the creatures they'd become
could walk, as I, elated

Myre's Mire
Thursday, November 26, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
***Myre's Mirepoetry by Clive CulverhouseWhy Myre's Mire? What does that mean? I have no idea. I had a dream one night and in that dream was a house built of wood and stone. A long driveway led up to the house. At the beginning of the driveway was a wooden sign with scratched lettering carved into it. The sign read Myre's Mire.As I slowly approached the house, I felt the house had a great many people inside it. A voice accompanied, repeatedly saying We need his eyes, we want his eyes. Make of that what you will.***
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Clive Culverhouse 28 November 2020

this is one of my poems on the Write Out Loud poetry website this poem got a number of likes and a comment says " A beautiful, memorable poem."

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 November 2020

they wanted my eyes they wanted to see what I had seen and all the creatures they'd become could walk, as I, elated //// yeah, " Myre's Mire" - this poem lead me to a nightmare's conversation and struggle; amazing writings

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Clive Culverhouse 28 November 2020

thanks for commenting on my poem Myre's Mire glad you liked it., ,

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