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*****narcissus

Rating: 2.7


In saline silence
with lisp-the only eloquence
turned I the rosary of breathlessness
and through cracked, soiled and unsightly
bowl of my hands
sent out prayers to bathe
in musk of my breath on your skin
you undyingly wore

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naureen Ansari 17 September 2008

I am truely impressed, Rehan. Beautiful Poem! !

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Waqas Naeem 27 July 2008

I just don't have words to say how deeply i'm impressed by the intricacy of your verse...it's just profoundly beautiful...

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 19 July 2008

your work too is a rosary of pretty azure beads of words strung together upon the string of silvery imagery true to the multicolored and multilayered nature of humanity's caprice.ahem....good na? ...no? ...well i tried.

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shel cope 22 March 2008

Beautiful fragments you create ~s~

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