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! ! ! ! ! Like A Lunatic

Rating: 3.5


Like a lunatic
she had all my oceans rivers canals and seas
tied as her anklet
she ran with that racket
traumatizing my thirst
cloudless wrenched and wasted
Like a lunatic


Deaneroger's Prospective Love Letter Tale-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 03 November 2008

I could see the insanity of it all

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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 November 2008

Beautifully worded. Powerful expression of love despondence......10

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Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008

ohhhhhh! ! ! this is a superb short poem...loved it

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Aijaz Asif 07 November 2008

i'm out of words...i don't know what and how to write my feelings for this poem....marvellous, superb, excellent etc.etc..but your and other fellow poets writting is beyond all those words..least i can do is salute you with a bow for such a beautiful and expressive write...my all 10's are for all your write's...the title attracted me cause its my nick too 'lunatic' lol rgds asif

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Shahzia Batool 05 December 2012

Like a lunatic she had all my oceans rivers canals and seas tied as her anklet she ran with that racket traumatizing my thirst cloudless wrenched and wasted Like a lunatic I just quoted what i liked, what if you see the whole poem here! ! !

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Marieta Maglas 27 August 2009

excellent poem, very well written.....10+++++

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rago rago 08 July 2009

the expressions are thoughtful and provoking.......... well penned........

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 May 2009

Moving poem. 10 with pleasure.

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Simone Inez Harriman 17 December 2008

Awesome Rehan. The first of your pen I have read and I'm very impressed. I shall be reading more of you. (10 from me)

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