Nature reveals unto me,
So much style and energy,
From a pretty crocus,
To a fine grown tree,
Natures there in front of me.
Nature is my pretty friend,
A fine accomplice till my days end,
It's joyful sounds,
It's pleasant views,
Nature will always get me through.
Nature how you make me smile,
I sit with you quite often as time,
Passes by so pleasantly,
You give so much,
For all to see.
Jayne Louise Davies
May Nature continue, each day, to be in front of you, but don't forget behind you; it should be there too! Till each day's end, may Nature help 'us' through....blizzards, floods, and tornadoes too! !
COMMENT ONE: stanza 1: oops! you 'forgot' apostrophe in 'Nature's' Jayne, you seem to end each line with a comma, except the last line of each stanza has '.'. Hmm.
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COMMENT THREE (or is it FOUR?) : In lines 8 & 9 I think you DO WANT 'it's', twice, for 'it is', not 'its', for the possessive form of 'it', RIGHT? ! And YOU HAVE IT (twice) . ;) bri 5 stars