Nature (Translation Of My Urdu Poem Fitrat) Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Nature (Translation Of My Urdu Poem Fitrat)

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A butterfly in the sun lights a glowworm in moon lights
you have so many faces and all are enchanting
when I close my eyes and think of you
you become a colorful and fragrant flower
when I open my eyes and look at you
I see you in all the seven colors
when it's too dark within me and lack my vision
in a palanquin of a full moon you smile like a bride
why don't you meet on the bank of a river, I'm loving,
but you go on dancing with the waves of the river
without you my complexion is becoming dark like Krishna
though you appear as a Radha with stars like your mates
when my heart and soul start burning
with the pleasant winds you come as clouds
I am restless with your thirst and fumes evolve from my brain
I think to welcome my death but you then come as rains
I don't know who are you but I know you are mine
since long and forever I am yours, own me,
whoever and wherever I want to see you naked
but you hide yourself in a semitransparent aurora
In the sweet tunes of music and in my poetry, it's you,
but you disguise as my beloved woman and meet me.

Monday, October 9, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: nature walks
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 24 October 2017

Nature is the beloved of many, a seductress who enchants poets and lovers with her alluring charms! A lovely dedication to Nature Goddess! Enjoyed reading!

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Khalida Bano Ali 11 October 2017

A very good poem but the Urdu poem written in poet's own mother language is is miles ahead of it.

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Indira Renganathan 10 October 2017

Who will not love such a nature as you've described in your poem...nature has dangerous pitfalls, disasters and all else qualities too...but a true nature-lover admires that too as it is god made and divine...a true poet like you can easily fall in love with nature and no wonder you've shared such a marvelous poem here....excellent work Akhtar..thanks a lot for this poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2017

As per thought action is planned and ambition is made for achievement. You are scared to the perfume made by flowers. I open my eyes and look at the sky. You call your colors in seven colors of the globe. These colours will give you a nice perception. But just in the scenes of the river, you dump your picture and bring royal smile for me. The entire body of the oxygen is hidden from the blond body and people may not like this. All need fresh oxygen for survival. An amazing poem on nature is vividly presented in fabulous and marvelous way. Brilliant perspective is outlined..10

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