Reshma Ramesh

Rookie - 56 Points (20th April / Bangalore, India)

Need Your Spell - Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Down into the dark alley way,
Oh baby! I know not where to you walk,
I am so mesmerized by your looks
Oh baby! lead me lead me,
I am so lost in the sounds of your footsteps,
Enchanted by the hair that swishes,
Maybe you are taking me down,
Maybe I can never get back
From this dark dark dungeon
Heaven or hell
Oh baby! as you lead,
My soles they bleed,
Me, I am high, I am low,
Oh! darling please please
Never let me go,
Captivated by your eyes,
Baby baby you haunt me,
Lead me, lead me, I will follow
From heaven to hell,
I am at your mercy,
Baby baby take my heart,
And if you leave me down here,
Never to come back darling,
Please remember this soul
Needs your spell to
Come back to life again.

Comments about Need Your Spell by Reshma Ramesh

  • (12/3/2008 10:12:00 PM)

    oh.... what a perfect mystery poem.... a suspense.... that allude me to see
    whats in my heart... so special indeed.... i love to read... some of the elements in your poem... Thank you... God bless
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  • Sadiqullah Khan (12/2/2008 2:36:00 AM)

    There is a lot hidden passion here and reshma you always know how then to express it, , i like the passionate style, , why not to be outlandish, , there is someone out there who can speak with fervour, , many 10s (Report) Reply

  • (12/1/2008 8:30:00 AM)

    Sounds like he bewitched you.... passionately told. HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • (11/30/2008 6:32:00 AM)

    You've captured the feeling so well Reshma.. Andrew 10 (Report) Reply

  • Tarun Sharma (11/30/2008 2:55:00 AM)

    crystal clear heart for the noun in the poem,
    true and couragious
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  • Palas Kumar Ray (11/23/2008 2:11:00 PM)

    This is a poem.
    A love song.
    A prayer.
    It tells me someone is there badly in love.
    Someone's there who need help very badly.
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  • (11/22/2008 1:17:00 AM)

    This poem would definitely make great lyrics for a love song. Haunting and passionate, I can hear a guitar wailing through your lines. An interesting variation on your other poetry too. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (11/20/2008 11:19:00 PM)

    WoooooooooosH! I think my P.C. wires might be smoking! lol! Hope to see this one in your soon-to-come-collection, young lady!

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  • (11/20/2008 10:44:00 PM)

    Oh...this poem haunts......greatly expressed....with amazing intensity...thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 20, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 23, 2008

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