Needing Release Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Needing Release



Intense pain filling this being, writing anyway,
needing the release it brings to intellect, a
finite and beautiful melody.

Bringing peace and serenity while sitting here
with pen in hand, loving the imagery coming to
mind.

Going through imagination and intellect together,
blending so perfectly and gently with this poet-
ical mind.

Giving an intense sense of joy and elation while
writing and listening to music, taking away all
the stress of living on this earth.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 21 May 2017

This is a marvelous poem, and it is a brave poem. You could have stayed with the theme announced in the first stanza expressing sadness and revealing your pain, and no reader would fault you doing so. But instead you voice H-O-P-E and you follow your model of Creative Writing in which your joy in writing becomes our joy in reading. That's why I call this a brave poem. Its bravery comes from your persistent Interior Life.

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