Never Again...
I've come to believe my soul's on the other side
Feeling like I'm on a constant rollar coaster ride.
Breathing heavily and skin flushed
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Well Young Lady, , , , , , , a most masterly piece of voice.......and the stamina to sustain that which is no more.....yet your last two lines sumise the final truth well done
A well mastered work, indeed...Much genuine emotion employed here, for certain...You have mastered 'Controllede Chaos' here, Kris, with a golden pen & a disciplined mind...i love it....Goes in as one of my Fav'.s..... Frankster/FJR
An excellent epic write Kristin. A rollercoaster poem too. Very well expressed. Enjoyed the read, good way of getting rid of tension. Well done. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX How ya doin? ? ? ? ?
holy crap! ! ! loved this write of yours! ! ! soooo very emotional.......how you went through the highs and lows......and came out stronger! ! ! ! beautifully written! ! ! ! angain thnx for sharing! ! ! ! ! Brian~