Never Ask The Sun Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Never Ask The Sun

Rating: 5.0


In the light blanket of snow
There are remnants of rabbit tracks
And golden and red leaves are underneath it;
Peeking through
My breath tells me that the last days
Of the year are almost here
Quielty, I drink the last drop of coffee
As I smoke the end of my cigarette
I turn towards to the sunlight
And ponder if any success will be
Shower upon me
Then. I smile and head towards the door
For I know not to ask the sun for favours
Because it's not the one to question

Thursday, November 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: morning,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 02 November 2021

A splendid poem! Well penned... Bravo

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 November 2019

Love! Shower upon me; Life! ! Bring me joy. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 November 2019

as beautiful be the year ending poetess

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C F 28 November 2019

Beautiful poem, I somehow find your second to the last line so touching and sad: For I know not to ask the sun for favours 10+

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