New Poem Today (2) Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

New Poem Today (2)

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Thinking And Facts

sitting in the rose mansion,
i hear lovely sweet attention

the moon hides behind a darkest veil
peaceful, no any gale

he smiles mysteriously

the sweetest smile

i smell the new tea
soft fragrant from a myriad mile

New Poem Today (2)
Thursday, January 28, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: moon,sweet,new
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
picture is from Mr. Google
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Pintu Mahakul 30 January 2021

Mysterious and melodious wind brings fragrance of rose near us. Rose petals greet us time to time. Near river or lake, when we see giggling rose, we too smile in greater joy and our stress of mind goes away. Like jasmine, rose is also so pretty fragrant flower.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 30 January 2021

Every day we love to read new poems because new poems bring new joy and new light in life. A poet like you definitely feels God's grace sitting in rose mansion to write the beautiful poem. Natural thrill motivates mind and beauty whispers.

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Varsha M 28 January 2021

Long distance love has its own sweetness and glory. The hide and seek of moon plays so well and longing to meet someday spices the relationship building beautiful bond at times and at times not also. Ma'am v day still a bit far...you are flavouring the season.

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