Last night so cold my dear,
I'd been waitin' you came not to my ear
where were you, my love
gone I was shocked, prayed to God above
deepest shocked, my ratio blocked,
my aspirations almost locked
an attack on my mental part
so sad realizing you have from the very start
always a very weak heart
my heart begins to speak and redeems
all the lies for the good truth, it seems
you've understood the conditions
also every awful regulation
Last night I had it so cold my dear,
I'd been waitin' but you did not appear
Spellbinding write. It conveys a feeling of pensive sadness in striking words. It depicted a strong and honest emotion that come from the Poet's heart. The last stanza is so moving. Beautifully crafted write.10
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Beautiful, beautiful poem worth revisiting. Always love to read this poem and always amaze on how you expressed and crafted this poetic gem. To my favorites.
Perfect! Read this poem with interest. Each word is a piece of diamond... touching
What a brilliant poem dear poetess! You have meticulously comprehended a poet's heart. This poem carries value and precious substance! !
Swimming in the sea of romantic sadness is this creative and compelling composition. Well done my friend!
Thank you so much, Howard.I appreciate every word you say, since they are a true creative and cute response. GBU my friend.