Last night so cold my dear,
I'd been waitin' you came not to my ear
where were you, my love
gone I was shocked, prayed to God above
deepest shocked, my ratio blocked,
my aspirations almost locked
an attack on my mental part
so sad realizing you have from the very start
always a very weak heart
my heart begins to speak and redeems
all the lies for the good truth, it seems
you've understood the conditions
also every awful regulation
Last night I had it so cold my dear,
I'd been waitin' but you did not appear
Congratulations, Sylvia. This poem is ranked #76 in the best poems of members
Today on number 79 Unnikrishnan, thank you so much for being alert
Thank you foryour words, Unnikrishnan. You are a true poet friend!
Thank you so much, Unnikrishnan for your constant attentive observations concerning Best Member Poems. Thank YOU!
Beautiful, beautiful poem worth revisiting. Always love to read this poem and always amaze on how you expressed and crafted this poetic gem. To my favorites.
I am flattered, honoured and so happy to read your magnificent response. Thank you so much for this sublimest support
Deep inwardness becomes a chapter of a romance as you court the Muse for the warmth she can bring. In truth she is your heart of hearts.
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