A Poet´s Heart Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

A Poet´s Heart

Rating: 4.8


Last night so cold my dear,
I'd been waitin' you came not to my ear
where were you, my love
gone I was shocked, prayed to God above

deepest shocked, my ratio blocked,
my aspirations almost locked
an attack on my mental part
so sad realizing you have from the very start
always a very weak heart

my heart begins to speak and redeems
all the lies for the good truth, it seems
you've understood the conditions
also every awful regulation

Last night I had it so cold my dear,
I'd been waitin' but you did not appear

A Poet´s Heart
Thursday, December 15, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: melancholy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poet´s heart is oft changeable, not be uttered in precise algebraic limited technique, but it will be inspired as the daily breezes blow throughout the four seasons, all the year. But the poetic mind prevails. Thank you for reading and commenting.Could we awaken Emily D. too and could we ask her WHAT REASON WAS IT when you created THE SEA? I have the idea that she has the same reason as I, I reckon. Thankfully yours, Sylvia FC.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Spellbinding write. It conveys a feeling of pensive sadness in striking words. It depicted a strong and honest emotion that come from the Poet's heart. The last stanza is so moving. Beautifully crafted write.10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 January 2019

Thank you so much for the precious 10 and your visit I most appreciate.

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Swimming in the sea of romantic sadness is this creative and compelling composition. Well done my friend!

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Thank you so much, Howard.I appreciate every word you say, since they are a true creative and cute response. GBU my friend.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 December 2021

Perfect! Read this poem with interest. Each word is a piece of diamond... touching

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 December 2021

What a brilliant poem dear poetess! You have meticulously comprehended a poet's heart. This poem carries value and precious substance! !

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Nabakishore Dash 05 October 2021

reflection of a true poet's heart.

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Nabakishore Dash 16 September 2021

Excellent precise expression of a seeking heart.

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Indira Renganathan 19 August 2021

If everything goes well on a good understanding then waiting itself is a bliss...if other way it be it becomes a ...that is the nature of love....5*****

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