Friday, December 11, 2015

New Year's Day Nap Comments

Rating: 4.1

Fiesta Bowl on low.
My son lying here on the couch
on the 'Dad' pillow he made for me
in the Seventh Grade. Now a sophomore
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Coleman Barks
Dad
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Fabrizio Frosini 29 May 2016

from a dad's perspective, this one could be sort of equivalent of Pamela Sinicrope's Mother At Midnight - poem of the day.. :)

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Spock The Vegan 29 December 2015

I didn't understand until I read Kim Barney's comment. I agree. I wonder what else I didn't understand.

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Susan Williams 27 December 2015

I have never heard it described with such humor, beauty, solemnity, and grandeur all at one and the same time: came out of nowhere with a million micro-lemmings who all died but one piercer of membrane, specially picked to start a brainmaking, egg-drop soup, that stirred two sun and moon centers for a new-painted sky in the tiniest ballroom imaginable.

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Kim Barney 27 December 2015

Clever description of how the sperm fertilized the egg to create his son.

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Manonton Dalan 27 December 2015

very good father, you raised an outstanding kid

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Ramesh T A 27 December 2015

Everything has a change as time goes on life sure!

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Coleman Barks

Coleman Barks

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