Jagdish Singh Ramana

Gold Star - 8,024 Points (01/07/98 / Sri Ganganagar)

Night As One Likes - Poem by Jagdish Singh Ramana

In a lonely night
Beholding the lonely moon,
But in my sight;
Not alone, a poetic boon.

When I am alone
I am not really alone,
Loneliness gives me wide opinion
For that is my real companion.

In a weary mood, I count stars
Some peeping into the young tree,
A star falls down into the dark
And hides when I long to see.

Into the dark some stars scare
And some show their twinkling dare.

Topic(s) of this poem: motivational

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

IN a silent night thinking about metaphysical notions.

Comments about Night As One Likes by Jagdish Singh Ramana

  • (9/1/2019 1:23:00 AM)

    Greate write and lovely rhyme and rhythm. Cheers (Report)Reply

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  • Rajnish Manga (3/12/2019 3:48:00 AM)

    Loneliness gives me wide opinion
    For that is my real companion... //.... Brilliant poem with a moving landscape of night sky. This shows your master stroke while working on nature. Thanks a lot.
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  • Akhtar Jawad (3/4/2019 1:28:00 AM)

    Nature motivates us for love and love makes us beautiful. A wonderful poem. (Report)Reply

    Jagdish Singh Ramana(3/4/2019 3:12:00 AM)

    Thank you again, sir!

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (3/2/2019 10:21:00 PM)

    Nature could fill the void we feel inside our hearts.
    Its wonders and beauty fuel our mind to soar.
    A beautiful poem with great imagery.
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    Jagdish Singh Ramana(3/3/2019 7:00:00 AM)

    thanku you, mam!
    my pleasure!

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  • Poet Poet (2/3/2019 12:38:00 PM)

    very nice I WISH I had met you in BIKANEER when i visited ur place your line
    when I DO IT ALONE
    do what alone? ? ? ? ? ? nice poem ji wahe guru
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    Jagdish Singh Ramana(2/6/2019 8:59:00 PM)

    thank you for such lovely line.
    our hearts are here in poem hunter world. we meet here.

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  • Jagdish Singh Ramana (1/27/2019 12:13:00 AM)

    thanks a lot commenting on my poem.
    your precious views are encouragement for me to write more good and meaningful.
    thanks all of you!
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  • Amir Marandi (1/25/2019 5:23:00 PM)

    Loneliness gives me wide opinion
    For that is my real companion
    Such a strong display of emotions. Great poem. I hope the twinkling dare' of stars brightens your travelling path.
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  • Jennifer Birchall (1/21/2019 9:39:00 PM)

    Lovely picture you painted with your words Jagdish. Wonderful poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Prabir Gayen (1/20/2019 9:02:00 AM)

    Very good poem with subtle thought.....thanks (Report)Reply

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  • Drtony Brahmin (12/30/2018 6:28:00 AM)

    When I am alone
    I am not really alone, Even when the so called loneliness appear, there is an art to counter it in our lives. engaging oneself in wonderful activities. sometimes being alone is good......... for creative work. tony
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  • Jazib Kamalvi (12/29/2018 12:17:00 PM)

    A good start with a nice poem, Jagdish Singh. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/22/2018 5:46:00 AM)

    Nice one.. Straight from Heart (Report)Reply

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  • (4/22/2018 2:25:00 AM)

    Robert Murray smith Bernard F.Asuncion both thanks of you to encourage me (Report)Reply

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  • Robert Murray Smith (4/22/2018 1:52:00 AM)

    A good effort. Read as many poems as possible. Post five poems a day. (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (4/22/2018 1:35:00 AM)

    Dear Jagdish, such a wonderful poem....10+++++ (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 22, 2018

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 13, 2019


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