Our Flying Kite Poem by Jagdish Singh Ramana

Our Flying Kite

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Our kite flies
With friends,
Furr! furr! It sings
And dances into the sky.

Always string tends
Of love,
Says never to paecha(cut-loose the string)
From coming behind.

Fly above into the sky
With friends,
All are good for nothing
Make spring at dusk.

Monday, January 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I, with my friends, play and have gossips about the pan world at evening in our village school ground. That is the feeling of wonder that inspired me to write it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 14 January 2019

Fine poet dear poet...... Thanks////)

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Rajnish Manga 12 March 2019

The poem brings to fore the excitement relating to kite flying in the company of friends and peers. Thank you so much.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 February 2019

A lovely poem that brings back memories of childhood. This poem resonates with me. Great imagery.

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Srijita Mondal 06 February 2019

Beautiful poem.thanks for sharing

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Hazel Durham 31 January 2019

Wonderful and charming write as the flying kite in your caring hands represents joy and friendship!

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 January 2019

Fly above into the sky With friends, the Kite, the joy, thinking of my childhood joys how we played on the White Sands of the Seashore flying kites………. Your Poem led me into a journey full of joy and into my childhood. thank u dear Poet. tony

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