Night Of The Full Moon Poem by Tom Billsborough

Night Of The Full Moon

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White night where the crystalline water
Sleeps in repose on the lake's bed
And which a full round moon has led
Its squadron of stars to watch over.

And a tall oak is reflected round
In the unrippling mirror. White night
In which the water cradles the light
Of the highest wisdom and most profound.

It is a remnant of Sky which Nature comes
To embrace in her arms. It is a tatter
Of Sky which has now come down.

And in the night's silence the prayers
Come from the lover resigned alone
To love, which is the only richness he bears.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Translation of a poem from the Spanish of Miguel de Unamuno,20th Century Spanish poet.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wes Vogler 08 July 2016

The only richness he bears... much better.

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Tom Billsborough 09 July 2016

Thanks, Wes. I have amended the line. Tom Billsborough

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Wes Vogler 08 July 2016

I know it is a translation but I am not comfortable with that last line. Would you re-examine it? Is it just me?

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Tom Billsborough 08 July 2016

The literal translation is to love, which is his only riches... The is refers to love i.e. singular. I think it is is grammatically correct but perhaps richness might solve the possible ambiguity. I would be happy with that, if you agree. Tom

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